The Tale of Gift Wrap, Ginger Bread, and Justin Time
Hey guys and gals! Lol. I totally forgot to tell you how my February "dare" went so I'll fill you in on that now! I had to wear mismatched shoes to school so I wore one Nike tennis shoe and one Saucony tennis shoe and no one noticed. I'm totally serious. Maybe they noticed but if they did they certainly didn't mention anything to me! So that one was a sorta fail, but whatever :P It was fun anyway!
Vote on the March "dare" because March is almost done so we need to get moving! I was so busy earlier this month so now I'm going to get cracking at it.
Now for the main reason for the post. So today I stumbled across a short story we wrote in school and I thought, "You know what? Why don't I post this today!" So I'm posting it and hoping to get some constructive criticisms if you know what I mean! I don't think I've posted this story before, but if I have, sorry. I wrote it a long time ago and don't remember. Enjoy! Oh and sorry for the formatting, I hate the format Blogger has when you copy and paste because I always tab in on OpenOffice when I'm writing it..... Also, don't mind the bolded stuff, that's just something we had to do for the assignment.
The Tale of Gift Wrap,
Ginger Bread, and Justin Time
One
day, three kids named Gift Wrap, Ginger Bread, and Justin Time met up
all by chance. It all started one day when there was a gummy starfish
eating contest at the local shopping mall. The prize was a million
dollar starfish aquarium.
Gift,
Ginger, and Justin all wanted it to no end! Gift planned to keep it
for herself because she hated giving anything to anybody, especially
gifts, Ginger wanted it to give to her little sister Cinnamon for
Christmas, and Justin wanted to get it just for bragging rights and
because he liked the idea of free gummy starfish for breakfast that
morning.
The
contest started at 11:00 AM exactly in Nando's and many kids and
adult alike gathered there.
“I'm
gonna win the million dollar starfish aquarium! It's gonna be
mineeeeeeeee!” screamed a wild eyed toddler.
“No,
it's shall be mine when this challenge is over, which won't be long
because I am obviously the greatest,” challenged an adult with a
slightly evil gleam in his eye.
It was
10:59 AM and the owner of Nando's, Mr. Potato Head gathered all his
workers and told all the competitors to go and stand behind their
bowl of gummy starfishes.
“The
contest will officially start once the clock strikes eleven,”
Potato Head announced. “You may start eating right away and if you
run out, just ask one of my employees for another plate. We have
weighed each plate and our magical computers will tell us at the end
who has eaten the most pounds of gummy starfishes, that person will
take home the million dollar starfish aquarium!”
Everybody
cheered extremely wildly and looked at the aquarium that was as
big as an elephant (s).
Gift
Wrap was standing by her bowl of gummy starfishes eyeing the large
aquarium in the corner by the door behind her. How Gift wanted that
aquarium all for herself! She had just the perfect place to put it:
in her bedroom right beside her oversized ant-farm.
Next
to her Ginger Bread was hoping to win it for her sister, Cinnamon.
She could just imagine her sister's face on Christmas morning when
she unwrapped a gigantic starfish aquarium. Starfish were Ginger's
sister's favorite sea creature!
Justin
Time looked at his watch seeing that he only had thirty more seconds
until the competition for the million dollar starfish aquarium
arrived. Justin was thinking about how no matter how hard he tried,
he could never be early for anything. He was always just in time, or
late, if he tried hard enough.
Justin
stepped off the bus and rushed down the street towards the local
shopping mall where Nando's was located.
There
was such a big crowd, Justin didn't know how he would get to his own
plate of gummy starfishes in time, “Excuse me, ma'am. Sorry about
that sir.” Justin pushed through and finally squeezed into position
between Gift and Ginger, then looked at his watch again.
“Three
more seconds,” he whispered to himself and when the clock struck
11:00 AM, there was silence for a millisecond and then chaos erupted
while people started stuffing their faces with loads of gummy
starfishes.
Little
did they know, a little French man was looking around suspiciously
right outside the door by the million dollar starfish aquarium prize
(f).
All
the contestants had their backs to the prize so no one noticed when
Monsieur Bigbad de Spoon snuck out with the prize in the back of his
truck and drove away.
Back
at the contest, competitors of all shapes, sizes and ages, shoveled
gummy starfish after gummy starfish in their mouths.
One
little boy thought about how peculiar it was that the gummies
seemed to wiggle their little legs like a live octopus would (p).
He concluded that they must really be gummy octopuses in disguise as
gummy starfishes.
The
eating officially concluded at 11:30 AM and most contestants were
rolling on the floor moaning because of all that “gum” they put
in their stomachs in such a short amount of time.
Mr.
Potoato Head, the owner of Nando's and his girlfriend, Mrs. Cabbage
Patch, the co-owner, went up to the speaking platform. Now our
computers will calculate who has eaten the most pounds of gummy
starfishes! Drumroll please!”
Every
able person, or everyone who was not rolling around on the floor or
running to the mall bathroom, grinned and patted their hands on their
legs.
Ginger,
Gift, and Justin were all hoping and dreaming that the prize was
theirs to keep. All three had gleaming silver braces reflecting in
the light as they smiled, knowing that the million dollar starfish
aquarium could be theirs.
Cabbage
Patch gasped as she looked at the computer. She pointed to her
husband and all the Nando's employees gathered around as well. They
all had looks of shock on their faces as they staggered backwards.
“It
appears we have a three-way-tie!” Mr. Potato Head stammered and the
competitors gasped.
“What
will you do?” shouted a man.
“Yeah,
what's the tie-breaker?” bellowed another.
The
crowd murmured in agreement all looking at Potato and Cabbage with
almost accusing eyes.
“Oh,
hold your horses (i),” Potato started, “don't get too
riled up, it'll be fine. We'll find some way to settle this, but
first we'll announce the winners!”
“It
looks like there are three kids in the tie,” Cabbage said
and all the kids looked at each other expectantly. “The names
are..... Gift Wrap-”
Gift
gave a mighty hoot and grinned even bigger, she would get the
aquarium no matter what it took, at home, she was never refused
anything and refusal wasn't about to happen now.
“Ginger
Snap-” Cabbage continued.
Ginger
gave a fist pump and was left hanging when she tried to give Gift a
high five as Gift scowled at her. Justin crossed his fingers.
“And
the final name is.... Justin Time! They all ate 9.3 pounds of gummy
starfishes. Congratulations and we'll work something out for the
tie.”
“They
must've eaten millions (h)...” murmured the crowd.
Justin
impulsively hugged Ginger and they both lunged forward to include
Gift in the group “congrats” hug. Gift leapt away with a
disgusted look on her face then scowled.
Gift
turned around to see her prize
and let out a piercing scream which drew attention to the fact that
the million dollar aquarium was gone!
Pandemonium set in and those people who hadn't left when their names
were not called gasped and panicked. Mr. Potato Head and Ms. Cabbage
Patch made their way through the crowds to the plastic gold pedestal
where the aquarium had been sitting only thirty five minutes earlier.
They inspected the area and discovered one thing and one thing
alone. Laying on the floor right next to the pedestal was a single
piece of paper that had written in a messy scrawl what appeared to be
an address on it.
“I bet that's the address of the thief!” Mr. Potato Head
exclaimed.
Ginger and Justin approached them and declared, “Since the prize
is technically ours, and you don't have a tie breaker, we want to
propose an idea that will serve as a tie breaker, and an adventure.
Plus it'll solve you the problem of going to get it yourselves.”
“Ok, what is it? Keep talking then!” Cabbage said, eagerly.
“Well,
we want to go to the address ourselves and recover the stolen object!
We promise we'll be careful, and look after each other. While we're
there, we can talk to each other and determine how and if we need a
tiebreaker. Or if we decide not to have one, we'll figure out for
ourselves which one of us is most deserving!”
“That
sounds like a great idea!
Perfectly reasonable
too, with you kids going to get it, we won't have to worry about
liability claims if you're not on our property!” Potato said to
himself.
He called Gift over, “Gift, darling, would you like to go with
them too?”
“Oh, fine. If I have to,” said Gift who was obviously
eavesdropping. “But if I get my new outfit dirty in any part of
this, you owe me a new one.”
“Fine, fine. Now talk to each other about your strategy, tell your
mum's, and be off! Oh, and don't forget to take a trip to the
bathroom before you leave. Bye, now!”
The three left Nando's and stood together for a chat.
“Well, let's just take the bus and meet outside the house or
whatever it is at 12:00 PM.”
“I'm
not taking any bus that you peasants take, I will
have my chauffeur drive me in my private limo. You two can get your
own way.” Gift snapped as she pulled out her cellphone, turned
around, and walked away with her cellphone pressed to her ear,
talking to her mum.
“You wanna take the bus over with me?” Ginger asked Justin.
“Well, I should go home and tell my mom, but I don't have a
cellphone. So I'll quick run home then I'll take the bus to the
address and meet you there. Yeah?”
“Sure,
but you can't be late.
We don't have much time and something tells me that Gift will have
a cow (I) if we have to
stand around too long.
“I won't try to be late, I promise.” the two kids waved goodbye
and Ginger set off for the bus while Justin headed home.
At about 11:55 AM, Ginger arrived at a big warehouse. She checked
her slip of paper, and sure enough, it was the right address. She
spotted Gift waiting by the giant front gate tapping her foot
impatiently.
“Well,
it took you long
enough! Where is that boy anyway?”
“He's coming, he had to run home and tell his mom because you
didn't stick around long enough to let him borrow your phone.”
“So it's my fault then?” Gift snapped.
While the two girls were arguing, they didn't know that they were
being watched. From a curtained window, a face was spying on them,
telling his minions to go and get them and throw them into the human
sized cage made out of ginger bread.
“Where is Justin?” Both girls were facing the street, away from
the warehouse so they could watch for the bus that hopefully
contained Justin.
All of the sudden, Gift and Ginger screamed muffled screams as they
were dragged away by Monsieur Bigbad de Spoon's minions and thrown
into a cage made of ginger bread.
“Ah! I'm allergic to ginger bread!” Ginger squealed.
“Your
name is Ginger Bread....”
she said, but after she saw the look of horror on Ginger's face, she
added, “Don't you have any allergy meds?”
“Well,
yes I have my EpiPen, but needles are terrifying! Can I borrow your
sweatshirt to sit on so none of my skin touches the ginger bread?”
Gift
hesitated. She hated giving anything to people. If somebody didn't
have something, it wasn't her fault. “No, just stand up. I don't
want it to get dirty,” Gift sat down.
Ginger
pleaded one more time with no prevail.
Meanwhile,
it was 12:01 PM and Justin still hadn't made it to the warehouse. He
was still at his house searching for his bus pass, actually.
“Come
on, it's gotta be around here somewhere,” he muttered to himself.
“Looking
for this?” his mother said, peaking her head in the door and
holding Justin's bus pass.
“Yeah!
Where was it?” Just asked.
“On
the kitchen table. It always happens that whenever I look for
something, it shows up. Maybe if you put your things in the right
place right away, you would be able to find them quicker!”
“Yes,
mom,” Justin said and he left in search of the nearest bus.
Justin
was late. Again. Little did he know, that the girls really needed his
help! When Justin arrived at the warehouse, he scanned the street,
but finding no one, after a while, he decided to go in by himself.
The
moment his hand touched the gate, silent alarms started going off
inside Monsieur Bigbad de Spoon's security office. He immediately
sent out another one of his minions to get Justin.
Once
Justin was securely locked in the ginger bread cage with Ginger and
Gift, de Spoon sent every single one of his minions off to the store
to get something for the starfishes in his new aquarium to eat that
night.
“I
will deal with you in a few hours,” de Spoon told the kids.
“Never!”
Justin screamed, outraged.
As
soon as Monsieur Bigbad de Spoon left the room, Gift started whining
again and Ginger told Justin about how she was allergic to
gingerbread. Justin didn't have a sweatshirt she could sit on either,
but he said if he did, he would gladly give loan to her.
“Well,”
Gift interrupted, “how are you two planning on getting us out of
here! You got us into this mess into the first place.”
“We
did? We did?” Justin exploded.
“Guys,
please don't fight, that's not going to help anyone! But look at my
face!” Ginger said.
They
turned to look at her face and noticed that it was getting red and
puffy because of an allergic reaction.
“Gift!
Give her your sweatshirt! If we're going to get out of here, we need
to work together. First of all we have to figure out how to get out
of this cage!”
Gift
hesitated, then apprehensively handed her designer sweatshirt over.
“So--”
Justin started.
“We
need to break the ginger bread! It's still warm from the oven, so we
can make a hole to climb out of!” Gift interrupted.
She
was almost starting to warm up to these two other losers, especially
Justin. He was pretty good looking after all!
“Great
idea, Gift!” Justin said, “But first, we have to freeze the
security tapes so the security will still see us in there and won't
know we're escaping.”
“Ok,”
Gift said and she took a pencil out of her pocket and threw it at the
pause button on the camera in the room. “Why do they even include
those anyway?”
“But
will that stop all the cameras?”
“Yes,
it should. I took a class on it this summer,” Gift said. “Ok,
start tearing!”
As
Justin tore a chuck out of the cage and dropped it inside, starting
to tear off another, the piece on the ground started smoking and
burst into flames! Ginger hit the flames with the sweatshirt almost
extinguishing them, but they still would not go out. They were like
trick candles! It was going to burn them all alive!
Ginger,
sure that she was going to die anyway from all this ginger bread
around them, picked up the flaming piece of ginger bread and popped
it in her mouth.
“GINGER!
WHAT ARE YOU DOING!” Justin screamed, “YOU'RE GOING TO KILL
YOURSELF!”
But
the most peculiar thing happened. The second it entered her mouth, it
stopped flaming and Ginger was able to swallow it, just fine. The
only problem was, she was allergic to ginger bread, and that could
prove fatal as well.
“Quick
guys, we need to eat as much as we can. As soon as I pass out, stab
me with this,” Ginger handed the EpiPen to Justin, “and hopefully
I'll be ok.”
Gift
and Justin could tell that it was a hard thing for Ginger to do as
she made it clear that she was terrified of needles. Gift gave her a
slight reassuring smile.
They
all stuffed their faces full of ginger bread, and a whole started to
appear, almost big enough to climb out of. Ginger was getting wheezy,
and her face was getting huge from the swelling.
Finally,
they could climb out. Gift when through first and then pulled Ginger
through, as soon as she got out, sunk to the floor, unconscious.
Justin came through last.
“Let's
get her to a safe place to wake up,” Justin said. “Then we can
plot how to get the million dollar starfish aquarium and our escape.
They
dragged Ginger over to a large closet and set her up. Then they got
in the closet themselves and started planning.
“Well,
first we have to get the security out of their office and keep them
out of the picture. Got any ideas?”
“Well,”
Gift said, “since we know that the gingerbread cage bursts into
flames if we drop pieces on the floor, I could take some of that and
put into any room. Once the security notice the flames, they'll go
running and once they're in the room, I can lock them in.”
“Brilliant!”
Justin said and Gift beamed. “Then I can occupy the security office
and watch all the cameras. I'm sure there are communication headsets
in there, and I can let you know where the danger is using those.”
“By
then, Ginger should be ok and we could sneak back down and tie up
Monsieur Bigbad de Spoon while you're in the security office. Then
once he's out of the picture, all we have to do is call my chauffeur
to pick us and the million dollar starfish aquarium up.”
“Sounds
great, let's go!” Justin agreed.
“But
one thing!” Gift said, “If we're in danger, you have to
be on time to save the day. You just have to!”
“I
will. Promise,” Justin said and they both went of to their separate
ways.
Gift
quickly tore off a couple of pieces of the ginger bread cage, entered
the room, turned that particular room's camera on, and threw the
pieces on the ground. Thankfully they didn't start burning until she
threw them into the room. Then she hid around the corner and waited
for the security to go into the room.
Meanwhile,
Justin went upstairs towards the security room, making sure that he
was out of sight at all times. He saw the security rush out so he
entered their office, locking himself in just in case one of them
decided to come back for some odd reason.
Gift
locked the security dudes in then ran up to Justin to get two
headsets for both her and Ginger. Gift also gave Justin a quick run
through about how to turn all the cameras back on so he could monitor
everywhere for danger.
Gift
rushed downstairs and let Ginger, who was obviously back to
consciousness because she was banging on the door and yelling, out of
the closet and handed her the headset. She also explained the plan.
“Let's
go get de Spoon!” Ginger exclaimed!
The
pair hurried off to the office that said “Monsieur Bigbad de
Spoon's Office” and Ginger kicked the door in.
After
they tied de Spoon up with little trouble, they pulled him out and
put him in a second ginger bread cage next to the first one they were
in.
While
Ginger used the headset to tell Justin to come down, Gift fumbled for
her phone and called the chauffeur to come pick them up.
Little
did they know, while their backs were turned, de Spoon easily escaped
and was heading over to grab them. He grabbed Ginger by the wrist and
Gift by the hair and pulled them over, ready to lock them into the
closet.
“JUSTIN!
JUSTIN!” Ginger screamed into her headset, “Come down, now!”
Meanwhile,
Justin was making his way down when he took a wrong turn and stumbled
upon a room full of candy and junk food. Gummy starfishes were his
favourite food and there was stacks upon stacks of gummy starfishes
piled up there. He knew he needed to go down and help the girls but
one package of gummy starfish wouldn't hurt would it?
But
then he remembered what Gift said earlier: If we're in danger, you
have to be on time to save
the day. You just have to!
So he overcame the odds and scampered downstairs without the gummy
starfish.
“STOP RIGHT THERE MONSIEUR BIGBAD DE SPOON!”
de Spoon turned around to face Justin. Justin charged toward him
knocking him to the ground and freeing the girls.
“Ha, gotcha!” Justin said.
At that moment, the big bad Monsieur Bigbad de Spoon started crying!
Crying! Gift Wrap, Ginger Bread, and Justin Time were very confused.
“What's wrong?” Ginger said.
“It's just that, it may seem like i'm a criminal,” Bigbad
whimpered, “but really I'm a nice man. I'm just lonely! You see, I
never did find myself a wife, and I've always been on my own. I just
wanted the starfishes to keep me company! I just thought that maybe
for a while, I wouldn't be so lonely.”
Gift and Justin rethought their reasons for wanting the million
dollar starfish aquarium. “If we'd known that, we would have given
it to you! You only had to ask!”
“What?” Gift exclaimed. “Given it to him? Are you crazy? That
aquarium is going to me. No one else but me. I'm gonna put in in my
room right next to my giant ant farm!”
“Gift! You have plenty of things! This man needs it more than any
of us do! I was going to give it to my sister, Cinnamon, but he needs
it more than she does.” Ginger tried to reason.
“And I only wanted it because I thought it was cool. Well, it's
not that cool really, the starfish aren't even green, they're pink
instead.” Justin reasoned more.
Gift saw her visions for the perfect room flash before her eyes, but
eventually exhaled and said, “Ok, fine. I hate giving things to
people, but whatever. I'll just get my granddad to buy me the mini
lion exhibit instead.”
“What a sacrifice,” Justin whispered under his breath and Ginger
snickered.
“Thank you so much, kids!” de Spoon said, beaming.
“You're welcome Mr. Spoon,” they chanted, two of them more
happily than the other.
Gift's chauffeur picked them up outside of Monsieur Bigbad de
Spoon's warehouse and they all went back to Nandos to tell Mr. Potato
Head and Cabbage Patch what they had done.
Mr. Potato Head and Cabbage Patch were so amazed, that they called
the mayor, Sugar Cookie, and all three kids got one million dollars
and an award, and they all lived happily ever after. Gift had learned
to give, even if it was begrudgingly, Justin learned to be on time,
Ginger finally got over her fear of needles, and Monsieur Bigbad de
Spoon was never lonely again. What could be better?
You did the dare?? glad people were not rude to you, and they better not be! ;)
ReplyDeletethe story is so cute and also has good meaning. Congrats, good job!
Aww thanks :) It was very fun to write....
DeleteGood story... That was the story we had to do for school, right?
ReplyDeleteYeah! Is this Ev?? Or AJ?
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