Buenos noches favored readers! I'm gonna post a short story that I wrote called Invisible. I actually wrote it to submit to a kids magazine, but then hated it because it could only be 800 words and I'm a detail person.... I used to like it because I had so much more in there to set up the setting and characters. 800 words sounds like a lot but I can write 800 words pretty quickly. When I was finished writing this, counted the words and had over 1,200.... so I had to take a ton of parts out and then at the end I took word by word. It was really hard to take over 400 words out! It would be so much better if I could have kept those parts in. This is not my best writing at all, I could write better in kindergarten! Ok I'm rambling. Anyway here it is... I still hate it.